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This excerpt was a lot of fun Jesse. And very exciting to finally get a glimpse of your novel. I avoid farm raised fish when i can too just like with my eggs.. The name (Gabby Gaborino) and others remind me of Gogol with his funny sounding and sticky Russian names like Akaky Akakievich. I also like it takes place in Tampa. There's something funny about Totalitarianism and lip stick juxtaposed. Lip stick stuff was great btw. "the Holocaust is to history what The Doors is to music," there's your Amy Hempel line. The jogging and yelling to self lol reminded me of ee Cummings "Enormous Room" but maybe Gulag book rubbed off on you there haha. Can't wait to read more.

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